Tune with Maschine

First soundcloud.. hahah. Not sure of the genera.. maybe chill or DnB/Chill. All done with Maschine and some Komplete instruments. Used vocals from Charlene - "I've Never Been To Me"

http://soundcloud.com/soundsabound-1/talktome

Let me know if it's anygood or sucks.. or any feed back is good I find I usually start hating my tunes after working on them a while. Just get sick of hearing them. lol.

 

I think it sounds pretty darn good. Some advice others gave me which might work for you:

Vary the drums up a bit. So, the loop during the verse (which is awesome) can be more interesting if you take that 4 bar loop and move one snare hit a bit or alter the fill on bar 4 just a tiny bit. Otherwise I thought the mix was pretty good, could maybe use a little more bass, but that's just personal preference.

Just curious, did you make that drum loop, or did you import it from a loops pack? What kit did you use if you don't mind me asking?

 

Thanks for the tips! I will work on the variaions. Those drums I just tapped out - they are one of the Abbey road kits, I think the 70s Tight. Thanks again!

 

SMooth out that first synth a bit, my monitors r getting a bit of feedback, nice tune. Actually, it all smooths out nice in the mix.
herb friendly tune too

 

lol.. nice!