Urban house music/EDM done on my new Maschine MK3

Hi all,
it is such a pleasure to start using my new Maschine (MK3), I really love the workflow ... it is intuitive except some thing which I am not familiar with.

Yesterday I have tried to work with sampling, and used my own voice and the trolleybus in front of my house in my last track. I have also tried to implement some of the advise I received from experience guys - make track much shorter, compress it, do not overlay too much instruments, song structure clearer, express story, and punchy kick.

Here is the result.
I will be thankful for any feedback

 

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practically every person that in this Music Art for 10 years can give you advice, my advice to you is to try to rear your music with two in row eq from maschine. Cut the low just for the perspective... make width on other eq narrow than g up to 20 than sweep the frequences from somewhere in the middle from 300 to 3000hz and find a constant resonance like booming and kill it with eq from 20 to - 9 if you have a spectrum analyzer you can see how it looks. Your track need to be in balance.from bottom of frequences a rise than from a 2500hz fall to high freq without jumpy freq.Than you make sure to make a good gainstege but if its a pain than on last eq lower the volume so that on master you get - 8 or 10db to sort of have idea before you lower gain on all channels so use a limiter after those two eq and boost that amount of gain from minus to zero... just be in minus and on the output -1db or dont touch zero .I think that you than see the difference, only than you will hear your music and music that was your reference
( a goal to achieve, to sound like or to sound original but serious or you just have to know how you want to sound) every sound that is not a kick or bass have a low freq. so you need to clean that so they dont fight each other and sometimes it is godd to leave some things mudy for better overall sound mix but at the same time a kick and bass, kick can be heavy but than bass need to be tiner or vice versa, than yuo got a hi hats and snare defenetly to cut low freq on them to 2000 or more and same goes to lead sound and pluck you have also your kick is to sintetic try to raise to 20 db narrow to 0.1 on kick eq and than sweep and kill the harmonics that are fight against whole track...it ok Track and it has a emotion but i definitely see a potencial for many trick and fx to make it more serious. it should a much better or realy different, new and fresh and dont forget energy, you can shape it in your way just realy need a many hours in front of monitors and the hardest part to become a objective and roll the rock till you adapt your ears. to train your ears, to feel what is a ear fatigue, to expirience that, im sure you can achieve a good results for an year of enjoy in hobby with monitors no headphones, a real thing. yoou can do it and you will also need for just a Samles work because everything need to be packed to sound good and special