Working on a new track

Today I worked on this track, I tried to make something like kryptic minds.
Please give me some feedback! Dont mind bad transitions and stuff because it's still in the making..

 

Nice c track. Nice dynamic ...

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I like it . Different you could throw it in the middle of a techno set as some type of break break beat

 

dark and twisted, but the beat and melody are actually quite interesting. 7+ mins is way too long if you ask me... I'd try to condense it down by maybe eliminating the sections where the same bars repeat several times.... otherwise, well done

 

Interesting first minute, nice sound selection. 2 minutes in is a long wait for the slight extra instrumentation. I'd like to hear that come in around 1 or 1:15 minutes. Like to hear the break down a lot sooner, like the darth vader type sound but every once in a while the voice loses that dark vibe. Then the end needs more something. I would recommend saying what you got here in about half the time. Good start. Always try to raise the bar.

 

Thank You!

Thanks! Feel free to do so! And if you post your set online, send me a link!

Thank you for your feedback! The track isn't finished yet, there are some scenes where nothing happens and I will delete those, or maybe I'll have some interesting ideas for them... anyways, thank you

Thank you for you feedback! Yes I know its too long, I did the arrangement very quick, and there are some redundant scenes. I'll try to add some atmospheric sounds to keep listeners interested. Those voices are there to create a dark mood, they are from different documentaries of a youtube channel called Occult Demon Cassette, so I put a lot of processing on them to make them sound alike, hence darth vader sounding